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Ashes Of Love Poetry 🔥's avatar

You're right. Breathing changes, seeing and smelling the room. Then the twist, 3 spheres of observation, so very accurate. I want to see the witnesses.

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Sorry I need to read this like 6 more times before I can reply appropriately. I absolutely love it and thank you 😊

Fiona Bridges's avatar

My breathing certainly changed reading this. So well done and hot!